jedi haiku

Sakura flower
pretty in the morning sun
slowly falling down

I'm not sure if I got the count right:)

An act may be black,
Or an act may be white, but
All actors are grey.

Grey are all actors ;
Of many hues are the Acts ...
... And what of the Stage ?

the stage has no hue;
light and dark together flow,
back and forth, always.

Supports of the Play,
Colors move between value.
How is your acting?

all the world's a stage
the people, merely actors
we all play our part

Our parts, we all play -
- Grounds of consciousness, perhaps
A beastie or two ...

Shakti and Shiva-
The divine play of Lila;
Ebbing and Flowing..

the force flows strongly
reach out with open senses
peace will come to you

Brothers, haiku's are more than count of syllables and a bit of significancy.

There should be a deep connection to nature, moment, deep zen state of concentration and most careful choice of words, including not only what they mean and count of syllables, but etymology, resonance, rhythm within rhythm and all this inexplainable things which constitute poetry.

Haiku is more a meditation than wordplay. One true haiku a day is a tremendous feat.

That being said, I wish you success

(My haikus are in Russian, translation of poetry is hard for me still.)