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26 Aug 2015 02:34 #200897 by gombicek
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Sakura flower
pretty in the morning sun
slowly falling down

I'm not sure if I got the count right:)

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30 Aug 2015 20:46 - 30 Aug 2015 20:50 #201418 by user15542
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An act may be black,
Or an act may be white, but
All actors are grey.
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30 Aug 2015 20:58 #201421 by Alexandre Orion
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Grey are all actors ;
Of many hues are the Acts ...
... And what of the Stage ?

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"Chaque homme a des devoirs envers l'homme en tant qu'homme."
~ Henri Bergson
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31 Aug 2015 22:37 #201535 by steamboat28
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the stage has no hue;
light and dark together flow,
back and forth, always.
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01 Sep 2015 15:10 #201605 by J. K. Barger
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Supports of the Play,
Colors move between value.
How is your acting?

The Force is with you, always.
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01 Sep 2015 15:27 #201606 by RyuJin
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all the world's a stage
the people, merely actors
we all play our part

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Out of darkness, he brings light. Out of hatred, love. Out of dishonor, honor-james allen-
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01 Sep 2015 15:35 #201608 by Alexandre Orion
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Our parts, we all play -
- Grounds of consciousness, perhaps
A beastie or two ...

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02 Sep 2015 22:46 #201745 by J. K. Barger
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Shakti and Shiva-
The divine play of Lila;
Ebbing and Flowing..

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03 Sep 2015 01:40 #201761 by RyuJin
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the force flows strongly
reach out with open senses
peace will come to you

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Out of darkness, he brings light. Out of hatred, love. Out of dishonor, honor-james allen-
He who has conquered doubt and fear has conquered failure-james allen-
The sword is the key to heaven and hell-Mahomet-
The best won victory is that obtained without shedding blood-Count Katsu-
All men's souls are immortal, only the souls of the righteous are immortal and divine -Socrates-
I'm the best at what I do, what I do ain't pretty-wolverine

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03 Sep 2015 10:50 #201786 by den385
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Brothers, haiku's are more than count of syllables and a bit of significancy.

There should be a deep connection to nature, moment, deep zen state of concentration and most careful choice of words, including not only what they mean and count of syllables, but etymology, resonance, rhythm within rhythm and all this inexplainable things which constitute poetry.

Haiku is more a meditation than wordplay. One true haiku a day is a tremendous feat.

That being said, I wish you success :)

(My haikus are in Russian, translation of poetry is hard for me still.)
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