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13 Jan 2014 14:05 #133071 by Alexandre Orion
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Hamsters do it well ;
Not all can be ha-i-ku --
It has to have grace.

:P

"Chaque homme a des devoirs envers l'homme en tant qu'homme."
~ Henri Bergson
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15 Jan 2014 15:01 - 15 Jan 2014 15:03 #133386 by user15542
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Ice crawls over glass
Wind blowing into darkness
As the cars shiver
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15 Jan 2014 15:09 #133387 by Kawda Dopor
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Asgard's dark harbor.
God's peer repose sunlight's shore.
maiden where? Please here!

“Hokey religions and ancient weapons are no substitute for a good blaster at your side, kid.” -Han Solo
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15 Jan 2014 16:07 #133391 by Reliah
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Forgiving myself
Knowing I am capable
Learning to let go

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15 Jan 2014 19:59 #133435 by Axiom Eleven
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I shiver with glee
Strange feeling runs up my spine
Medichlorians

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19 Jan 2014 00:14 #133805 by MJS
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Jedis are careful,
Deliberate and measured,
But not good at counting.
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28 Jan 2014 11:48 - 28 Jan 2014 11:52 #135252 by user15542
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We tend to stick to a pretty general definition of haiku here, and I'm guilty of that as well here... you don't want to be the only guy writing 5-3-3 haiku for example :D but I thought this might be of interest to some of you. It gives you a more "contemporary" definition of haiku, including kigo, kireji etc.

I'm not posting this to say "You're all doing it wrong!" because there is no "wrong", I just thought it might be interesting :)


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30 Jan 2014 05:17 #135649 by Reliah
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Changes so quickly
Even I cannot keep up
All within myself

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30 Jan 2014 05:18 - 30 Jan 2014 05:19 #135650 by Reliah
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Did I do that right :P
There were so many new rules ;)
Something about fall :dry:

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30 Jan 2014 05:49 #135653 by steamboat28
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Reliah wrote: Did I do that right :P
There were so many new rules ;)
Something about fall :dry:



It doesn't matter;
"Learn the rules, and then forget,"
Those were Basho's words.
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