SW RPG

I know that we are not role players here at TOTJO, but I created a SW RPG adventure and am interested in any feedback members have regarding it. I have attached it with this post.

Sorry Brian, I don't see it?

Brian wrote: I have attached it with this post.

no you have not :laugh: but i would love to see it

Sounds good. Where is it tho ??

I don't know why it did not attach. Here it goes again.

It failed to load for some reason. Sorry.

is there a link maybe ?

Here is the link. Hope this works.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xuG8ucvMjzMyclNnvnL6bKtiamhup0amYDgbc7JaAac/edit?usp=sharing

These notes are well detailed and the story is engaging I would however advice for more flexibility and player allowance. I am assuming this is a Table Top kind of RPG with dice and such? Or is this a different sort of platform?

It has been my experience that most players will go a completely different direction than the GM's original intent. As such, at least for my groups Chapter here in Michigan....We tend to provide less content and more....Trigger notes. Small, non discriptive encounters to keep the ball running but allow for player development

Just some thoughts to consider anyways

Otherwise, it was fun to read I love seeing Role Players here. The whole "Realism" tends to scare them away

Here is another SW RPG Campaign I just finished. Any feedback would be appreciated.

https://docs.google.com/a/namisanfernandovalley.org/document/d/1qGByhIG9MbDzr04axA3LdO0aOufyLub9Vsw9zuSp5xE/edit?usp=sharing